Ailment Poem by Al Ameen Shuaib Assayouty Ologele

Ailment

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The air brake of
Evincing health, desist
It meditate into the pore
Which is interstice
And in Extreme
Misery I lie.

The alarm of boreness
Rang in me,
And interrupt the prudent
Being in my part
And in extreme
Misery I lie.

The body remain fulty
Through the vile fortification
Of the ailment
It persist me in the dusk
With Calvary
In extreme misery
I lie.

My eye become
Unperceptive
My head walk in the
Four cadinal
And my nose becomeoverwhelm
In extreme misery
I lie.

With God bliss and contention
I gound
In extreme misery
I lie.

To found myself
Awake in the morning
Healthy and stronger
Then it showed to me
That the misery is
Nothing but ailment
Which only need rest
And in extreme healthiness
I lie.

Tuesday, October 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: ailment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

WAO, THE POEM IS SUPERB, MORE AFFECTIONATE, TECHNICAL IN NATURE, VERY EASY DICTION WITH A GOOD INTUTION.

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Chinedu Dike 11 October 2016

An insightful train of thought, well articulated and nicely depicted in beautiful poetic diction with conviction. Lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Shuaib. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Al Ameen Shuaib Assayouty Ologele

Al Ameen Shuaib Assayouty Ologele

Ilorin, Kwara State Nigeria
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