Agony Poem by Alavi Maliha

Agony

Rating: 5.0


Let the broken heart fall apart
Or the broken wings might fly
How the teardrops became the flame
As the raindrops became fire,
All that she loved; or believed to be loved,
Now turned to disgust.
So the dreams are left by,
Only waiting to turn into dust.

Sunday, November 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: forgotten love,loneliness,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 27 April 2017

the broken wings might fly the teardrops became the flame the raindrops became fire, very poetic and imaginative expressions. thank you dear poetess

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Chinedu Dike 07 March 2017

A heart touching sad story nicely encapsulated with conviction. A well thought out poem. Thanks for sharing Alavi and do remain blessed.

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M Asim Nehal 18 June 2016

Heartfelt poem...........10

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