Vinod Kumar

Rookie (kannur-kerala-India)

Agony


God smiles with pleasant face
I raised my agonies
Why the earth filled with pain
When it will finish

God smiles with pleasant face
I untied my worries
Why the fight of fire
When it will conclude

God smiles again and again
And tell without spell
You are the responsible
And stay beyond the sky

Submitted: Wednesday, January 14, 2009
Edited: Saturday, January 07, 2012

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  • Rookie - 358 Points Maya Hanson (12/15/2013 2:16:00 PM)

    I am not religious but I loved this, especially the last two lines you are the responsible/and stay beyond the sky. nice poem!
    ~mye3 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,094 Points * Sunprincess * (12/8/2013 7:20:00 PM)

    I agree with everyone...God gave us the beautiful earth...
    most of the people who loved and try to take care of it
    are no longer alive... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,642 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/8/2013 1:01:00 PM)

    Excellent poem with a beautiful message..You are responsible and stay beyond the sky. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 111 Points Kelvin Owusu (12/8/2012 12:51:00 AM)

    the good and bad is caused by our actions, if only most of us could learn from others and our own mistakes/ misfortune each day would be a little brighter, a lovely piece great job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raymond Uyok (10/10/2011 5:39:00 PM)

    Using God's smiles to weave analogical metaphors is a great effort. Please comment on my works. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Malaya Roses (12/7/2010 1:48:00 AM)

    Every good thing come to the end and all pain shall come to the end when we reach the point of to be a humble human.
    We must not put so much of thought about the pain but find the reason in positive manner and guided by faith to ease those hurt.
    Very Good Poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 47 Points Linda Hepner (8/16/2010 5:58:00 PM)

    I have just been writing about World War 1 and your poem dovetails neatly into those thought. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,623 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 6:02:00 AM)

    God smiles with pleasant face
    I raised my agonies
    Why the earth filled with pain
    When it will finish.............love and pain..pain and happiness are are ingredients of His love and we must resepct it..Ity is His wish that we should undergo it and if we ca't understand than it is our fault.....10

    lovely poem with very good message to human race......read mine i am disgrace...go back... pulled from deep sleep (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points marvin brato (10/9/2009 4:06:00 AM)

    Very reflective piece
    inspiring though
    now man does know
    of his own making
    did he suffered all the pains (Report) Reply

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