Agony Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

we are the reason of our own sadness/ a good poem! ! !

the good and bad is caused by our actions, if only most of us could learn from others and our own mistakes/ misfortune each day would be a little brighter, a lovely piece great job

A little polishing and it will be awesome :)

good thoughts well expressed...

Using God's smiles to weave analogical metaphors is a great effort. Please comment on my works.

The importance of the poem is the reason shown in the conclusion that is you are the responsible. well done.

I am not religious but I loved this, especially the last two lines you are the responsible/and stay beyond the sky. nice poem! ~mye3

Very nice poem. Keep on writing

Excellent poem with a beautiful message..You are responsible and stay beyond the sky. Loved reading it.

this is an excellent poem, keep up the good work..