Vinod Kumar

Rookie (kannur-kerala-India)

Agony - Poem by Vinod Kumar

God smiles with pleasant face
I raised my agonies
Why the earth filled with pain
When it will finish

God smiles with pleasant face
I untied my worries
Why the fight of fire
When it will conclude

God smiles again and again
And tell without spell
You are the responsible
And stay beyond the sky

Comments about Agony by Vinod Kumar

  • Gold Star - 38,730 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (12/8/2014 2:59:00 AM)

    The importance of the poem is the reason shown in the conclusion that is you are the responsible. well done. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 830 Points Maya Hanson (12/15/2013 2:16:00 PM)

    I am not religious but I loved this, especially the last two lines you are the responsible/and stay beyond the sky. nice poem!
    ~mye3 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,227 Points * Sunprincess * (12/8/2013 7:20:00 PM)

    I agree with everyone...God gave us the beautiful earth...
    most of the people who loved and try to take care of it
    are no longer alive... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,541 Points Babatunde Aremu (12/8/2013 2:23:00 PM)

    Very nice poem. Keep on writing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/8/2013 1:01:00 PM)

    Excellent poem with a beautiful message..You are responsible and stay beyond the sky. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Guenael Oristel (1/8/2013 2:23:00 PM)

    this is an excellent poem, keep up the good work.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Ronn Michael Salinas (12/8/2012 1:16:00 PM)

    A little polishing and it will be awesome :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (12/8/2012 12:51:00 AM)

    the good and bad is caused by our actions, if only most of us could learn from others and our own mistakes/ misfortune each day would be a little brighter, a lovely piece great job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 229 Points Prasanna Kumari (11/9/2012 10:19:00 AM)

    good thoughts well expressed... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 489 Points Vipins Puthooran (1/7/2012 12:59:00 PM)

    we are the reason of our own sadness/ a good poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 489 Points Vipins Puthooran (1/7/2012 12:48:00 PM)

    we are the reason of our own sadness/ a good poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Raymond Uyok (10/10/2011 5:39:00 PM)

    Using God's smiles to weave analogical metaphors is a great effort. Please comment on my works. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,222 Points Adeline Foster (8/3/2011 3:46:00 PM)

    A lovely poem that many of us would agree with. Thanks for reading mine.
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Malaya Roses (12/7/2010 1:48:00 AM)

    Every good thing come to the end and all pain shall come to the end when we reach the point of to be a humble human.
    We must not put so much of thought about the pain but find the reason in positive manner and guided by faith to ease those hurt.
    Very Good Poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 57 Points Linda Hepner (8/16/2010 5:58:00 PM)

    I have just been writing about World War 1 and your poem dovetails neatly into those thought. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (3/3/2010 7:30:00 AM)

    Amazing and a grand finale [last 2 lines]
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,582 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/1/2010 9:23:00 AM)

    The smile of God is so amazing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maria Barbara Korynt (12/12/2009 11:59:00 AM)

    Interesting poem, interesting writing. Great end. Very much I like it. (10v.)
    Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 81,908 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2009 6:02:00 AM)

    God smiles with pleasant face
    I raised my agonies
    Why the earth filled with pain
    When it will and pain..pain and happiness are are ingredients of His love and we must resepct it..Ity is His wish that we should undergo it and if we ca't understand than it is our fault.....10

    lovely poem with very good message to human mine i am disgrace...go back... pulled from deep sleep (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 634 Points marvin brato (10/9/2009 4:06:00 AM)

    Very reflective piece
    inspiring though
    now man does know
    of his own making
    did he suffered all the pains (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 7, 2012

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