clawdea benat

Freshman - 742 Points (philippines)

Agony - Poem by clawdea benat

I pay the dime that you spit
having me misunderstood for a long time
left out in the dark
while you are in the light
I was scared for what is right
was this is just wrong
I swear I kept my secret
I swear my hypothesis is perfect
but its not the other way in the end
would you let me now speak
for the sake of me
I want to be free
free for you
cause things change
and I never change
its crazy this is crazy
in this I see

Comments about Agony by clawdea benat

  • Gold Star - 5,719 Points Alesia Leach (11/2/2014 10:18:00 AM)

    I could feel your agony. Nicely penned. (Report) Reply

    Freshman - 742 Points Claudge Ben-at (10/14/2015 1:08:00 AM)

    thank you mam.. :)

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  • Gold Star - 16,844 Points John Westlake (10/13/2014 5:10:00 PM)

    Interesting poem here. You mean it's rather than its. Apart from that, in a way it works (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,689 Points Herbert Guitang (4/27/2014 6:00:00 AM)

    I feel the agony of the poem.You are so good.

    Pls visit my page (Report) Reply

    Freshman - 742 Points Claudge Ben-at (10/14/2015 1:10:00 AM)

    thank you Herbert for being there, correcting and appreciating my way of style. :)

  • Veteran Poet - 1,051 Points Maya Hanson (1/6/2014 11:02:00 AM)

    I like this! original and true...
    ~mye3 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 7, 2013

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