Ages And The Phoenix Poem by koyel mitra

Ages And The Phoenix

Rating: 4.7


For ages there have been decadence,
The denudation of the life's essence;
Life is but a fight of the presence.

Dreams have built the castles of ages in air,
People let go of them in acute despair;
Of spirits people are on arrears,
Fortitude and bonanza allay their fears.

Since the dawn of civilization there have been mind's insurgence,
which is nothing but the Phoenix's resurgence!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 01 October 2008

a nice well written concept..a wonderful piece... Ency Bearis

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 October 2008

'Since the dawn of civilization there have been mind's insurgence, which is nothing but the Phoenix's resurgence! ' A very nice poem. Love and 10+

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Joseph Poewhit 01 October 2008

I like that line with dreams, castles and most of all air

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Aiswarya. T.anish 01 October 2008

Dreams have built the castles of ages in air, People let go of them in acute despair; Of spirits people are on arrears, Fortitude and bonanza allay their fears. great lines

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 October 2008

I love your Phoenix transverses into age's formation barriers to emerge afresh.Lovely piece from you koyel! !

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Koyel. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Indranil Bhaduri 29 September 2012

Very well written..Loved the piece, ,

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 November 2008

A thoughtful poem, which relates life and the myth of the Phoenix. Well written!

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 11 October 2008

Really a clever writing of a poem, well observed!

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Yasser Koor 06 October 2008

umm it is nice poem i like god work this poem is what world is and what poeple need life is fight of the presence and yes there is mind's insurgence, well-done good i gave u *10*

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