Midnights Voice

Veteran Poet - 1,166 Points (November 3,1950 / Selma, Alabama)

Age of Emptiness


In an age of emptiness
in the ways of nonsense
the meaning of life
is meaningless

If we stand
do we each alone
single thoughts under
single days and nights

'The fertile fallow furrow
fleeting under flurries of fressly
fallen snow.'

for sure...

And we are the huskless stalks
shivering in the wind
row upon row
thousands upon thousands
going nowhere
and nowhere to go

Submitted: Friday, August 03, 2012
Edited: Thursday, September 27, 2012

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written March 10,1997

Comments about this poem (Age of Emptiness by Midnights Voice )

  • Gold Star - 6,710 Points Amitava Sur (12/5/2014 8:40:00 AM)

    A very thoughtful expression of the Age of emptiness which intensely poignant. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 343 Points F. J. Thomas (6/30/2014 9:32:00 AM)

    Maybe as we watch the mass make no progress the few will be inspired to; at least in our own lives ;) Wonderful Thomas...oh did you mean it to be freshly fallen snow? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,372 Points Valsa George (1/21/2014 12:08:00 AM)

    The dark age looming large with depressing intensity! Very powerful write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Princess Lilypad (9/1/2013 2:40:00 AM)

    loved the conceptual question regarding solidarity. it's the answerable question. that no one wants to admit the answer to. compelling. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,268 Points Neela Nath (8/2/2013 8:57:00 AM)

    Age of decadence, indeed.Very profound thought and relevant too. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Zamir Osorov (8/2/2013 5:11:00 AM)

    awesome! killing effect of ordinary face of emtiness (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/25/2013 12:13:00 PM)

    The poem is really deep and its true, , where the emptiness of age is taking us to..Beautiful write... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (7/17/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    we are the huskless stalks shivering in the wind. good words midnight.. but sometimes the husks are attached
    a good read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Titi Dale (2/26/2013 2:56:00 AM)

    I love how you write Thomas. You write like you don't care, like poems are just another star in the night sky... This is a great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 56 Points Jahan Zeb (12/18/2012 7:45:00 AM)

    The fertile fallow furrow
    fleeting under flurries of fressly
    fallen snow.'..............Lovely alliteration not merely alliteration but thought as well.

    The poem as a whole is marvelous. Great poetic job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 652 Points Paul Brookes (12/9/2012 5:17:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem in its simplicity of line and spareness. You are a unique voice. : 0) Paul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 429 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (12/6/2012 8:31:00 AM)

    I wish you are not so pessimistic to think the meaning of life is meaningless.I for one feel that we are here born for the continuation of our progeny and to do our best to help others in misery.But as a poem the write is enchanting! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 52 Points Erika Wingo (12/4/2012 11:47:00 PM)

    This took my breath away... There are no words. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rachel Branscombe (12/2/2012 12:40:00 AM)

    That poem is really deep. It made me think my life and where it is heading. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,196 Points Elena Sandu (11/29/2012 5:36:00 AM)

    Goose bumps! How sadly true, yes indeed the meaning of life is meaningless. Great poem, thank you for share! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brian S (11/27/2012 10:21:00 PM)

    great writing! I look forward to reading more. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,568 Points * Sunprincess * (9/29/2012 2:18:00 PM)

    awesome poem..love the visuals of freshly fallen snow.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 915 Points Cynthia Buhain-baello (9/4/2012 3:56:00 AM)

    The lines hold out well the theme of the poem and more vividly, in the huskless stalks shivering in the wind.The last lines convey utter emptiness in lack of purpose. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Constance K Yost (8/20/2012 12:28:00 PM)

    You write with such eloquence yet your meaning never gets lost. I love this one. Constance Yost23875 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shalyn Stachmus (8/9/2012 11:29:00 PM)

    This poem is wonderful. So very simple, but yet the content is profound and provocative of those much deeper questions of humanity, especially pertaining to today. I thoroughly enjoy this poem, Midnight. (Report) Reply

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