Against My Empty Soul Poem by Brian Kilpatrick

Against My Empty Soul

Rating: 4.5


The answer echoes
Against my empty soul
I listen to the waves
As they come and go
The language unfamiliar
As the summer is to the snow
My soul longs
For what my heart
Forgot so long ago
Speak now in a language
That I may understand
For all these years
What the waves have said
To the sand

Saturday, December 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 01 February 2016

This is written beautifully...I liked it, Thanks for sharing.

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Kim Barney 01 February 2016

This is very nice, and well deserves being chosen as poem of the day!

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Souren Mondal 01 February 2016

We all have that spiritual voice within us that can soothe us at our worst times.. A fine poem with richest of the imagery. Thank you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 February 2016

The echoes of life! Thanks for sharing.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 01 February 2016

wow, what a lovely piece! Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 February 2017

Splendid! ! ! Congrats on being chosen....

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Savita Tyagi 01 February 2017

Lovely poem. Congratulations and thanks for sharing.

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Kevin Patrick 01 February 2017

Beautifully expressed, some amazing lines hear, deeply thoughtful and well composed. Awsome

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The ever changing cycles of lessons we learn to reach what our souls always knew..love this poem a ten..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 February 2017

A beautifully conceived equally beautiful poem. Congrats on it's member poem of the Day.

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