Aftermath Of A Ballot Cast Poem by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Aftermath Of A Ballot Cast



Holding back...
Not wanting to count the chickens
before they hatch
Braving the winter winds
First the oath and we the people
Listen pensively, hopefully as he
pledges before God and man to
protect...care
Take a stand...For good and new
happenings
To service a nation-a people
Who portrayed their trust through
ballot
Now walking as if to battle
Armored with his promise, rare
determination and smile
This seemingly gentle man walking,
His first lady keeping stride at his
side
And the rest of us following their
lead
Biding our time but feeling already
The warm flowing tide of the new
spirit
Getting the feeling that he and we
are old friends.


This was written at the time of President Jimmy Carter's inauguration.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 20 November 2008

A beautiful tribute which captures this historical moment and some of the endearing qualities of this president. Stating these three (to protect...care /Take a stand...) adds emphasis. Again the inclusion of these three (promise, rare determination and smile) also highlights this portrait. I can sense the warm relationship you describe between the people and their chosen president. You depicted his most charming qualities: his humanness and caring for people. Very well done.

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