Afterlife Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Afterlife

Rating: 4.8


Flickering lights
sleepless nights
thoughts of another life
come into your mind

Strange noises
strange voices
is that them...
The afterlife

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 28 April 2012

Dave, you must have been reading my dreams of late! I have not been sleeping well for some time, mostly due to some amazing and strange dreams that have been visiting me. And the words you have here written sure hit it exactly correct. I wonder the same thing. Great write.

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Eric Cockrell 28 April 2012

perhaps we are there now! thought provoking!

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Sunny Chopra 29 April 2012

Very nice write indeed! ! Cheers!

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Katy Lue 29 April 2012

I really like this, it leaves me thinking. Great Poem!

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Valerie Dohren 29 April 2012

Interesting - food for thought.

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DJ Barclay 12 March 2019

I love your poem. It was actually the first poem i chose for my school project.

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Rajnish Manga 12 January 2017

Lovely poem that gives us a hint of what we think of our afterlife. Thanks, Alan Walker. You have a wonderful style of saying things.

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Heather Wilkins 06 September 2013

the unknown who is to say. keeps one thinking

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Ameya Deshpande 11 November 2012

in few words it says a lot, I find it funny & interesting, nice!

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 29 October 2012

Thanks for reading my poem... Short and sweet, this poem conveys a thought that men tend to forget. Awesome! :)

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