After The Storm Poem by ramesh rai

After The Storm

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The storm came and gone
leaving its ruins behind
zillion victims of death storm
floating, lying dead on
water and land seeking
paradise for heavenly abode
asking reason for life and death
turmoil of grief shouting.

First ray of sun greeted
zillion corpse leaving no space
between human, animal, insects and plants.

The sun ascended and descended
the nature fallen in comma prayed
for new begining of life with hope
for new creation, for new recreation.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salini Nair 05 December 2014

nature fallen in comma prayed for new begining of life with hope for new creation, for new recreation.......................great lines...like it

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 December 2014

new begining of life with hope for new creation Storms come and creating havoc. A new bright day gives new hope and all tragedy slips into the past.

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Hazel Durham 03 December 2014

Stunning write on the tragedy of a killer storm with inspired lines that capture the terrible loss of human life as they reach for paradise as the cycle of life continues!

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