After The Night Poem by Robbie Squires

After The Night

Rating: 4.8


After the sunrise had lighten up the morning sky
I hung my head and began to cry
My girl was gone, left in the night
I didn’t know why, could’ve just told me out right
But it doesn’t matter now
Im all alone and she with someone that isn’t me
Last night, what had happened that night?
Did I do something that filled her with spite?
Or maybe it was just my nature
That drove her away from here
I don’t know, but it doesn’t matter ya know
Because shes not with me anymore
She was the warm air in the summer breeze
But when night falls that all leaves
She had changed her mind immediately
And left in secrecy so I couldn’t see
Her running away, her leaving me
I don’t know, it doesn’t matter though
Because shes not with me anymore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 12 October 2011

Sad but nevertheless, well penned and poignant! I love its rich imagery and fine texture! 10+++ Keep inspiring the Poetry World with more of those talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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dymon sidebottom 28 November 2009

nice write. kinda sad but i really liked it

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 28 November 2009

its a sad poem though, she shouldn't have left you for that someone... good write...

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Kassiah Gervaise 27 November 2009

a very sweet sad touching poem.i loved it stay with the good work.

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