After Sex Poem by Saniya Galeyeva

After Sex

Rating: 4.9


After sex with you
I’ve got your smell on my skin.
You’ve got my smell too.
And you’ve got the smell of sin.

After sex with me
You go away and I stay.
I do not mind it.
For me it is just a game.

After sex with you
I’ve got your smell on my sheet.
I take it and put
Into my washing-machine.

After sex with me
You’ll tell me: “I love you, babe”.
I know it’s a trick.
I’ll feel as if I were raped.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sekharan Pookkat 30 May 2015

behold a nice feeling

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 November 2016

Human relationships are so very complicated...... the gap between words and reality......... truth and untruth, sin and virtue.. play... thank you for such a revealing poem

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 November 2016

There is depth in this poem. It is sometimes the reality one has to go through and not in control. Nice.

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Daniel Jones 11 April 2017

i love to find these heart wrenching honest poems here, i love the brave attack of opening up, putting a subject like this into words, this is so refreshing to read! ! excellent and thought provoking, a wonderful and the easiest 10 of the day by far! Thankyou.

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Monoj Panday 03 July 2017

very nice ur experession....

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 November 2020

Indeed one night stands and without commitment of marriage is just a free ride trick men use to get it without responsibility. Kudos for a fabulous sensational poem that many can relate to and learn from. Plz pleez do read my newest poem titled, " babies cry anywhere"

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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2020

without love is not 'making love', which is the best form of. Candid exprression, is the poem's added attraction. You may be glad to know that my poem 'Parallel Lines, Parallel Lives' has been published in the front page of poemHunter today as the 'Member Poem of the Day'. If you have some time, please read and comment.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 January 2019

A pragmatic description! I find the expression very candid! Open minded revelation of the fact.....10

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Clinton Siegle 13 September 2018

Sorry for your experience. To fell being raped is sickness. The game of is sadness without true love.

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 11 September 2018

A realistic description, .........................

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Saniya Galeyeva

Saniya Galeyeva

Russia, Orenburg region, Sorochinsk
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