After Bath Blues Poem by kanav justa

After Bath Blues

Rating: 5.0


I explored everywhere
Yet It wasn’t there
My underwear

It was only old a year
To me it was too dear
I had naught a thing to wear

But when I saw myself in mirror
I could see it clear
My underwear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 31 May 2013

myself in mirror, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2013

You should put the notice everywhere to remind you! if not you will write another poem, to find your socks and footprints hahahahaha_Soul

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Valerie Dohren 02 June 2013

Was it your birthday suit you saw in the mirror Kanav, or have you just got a bad memory. Amusing write.

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Patricia Grantham 05 June 2013

A very funny write. We all lay things aside sometimes and forget where we put them. A good thing you were not standing outside when you forgot it. Enjoyed it.

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Yash Shinde 03 April 2014

hahahhahaha! ! ! ! ! ! ...................kanav, you're so versatile! From that serious profile pic of yours, no one can expect, such a piece from you! You really have the guts to post such a piece in public! Here goes 10 for your write....

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Valsa George 18 November 2013

An interesting poem for a pleasant diversion! Made me chuckle to myself! Such things can happen!

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Divya Gupta 02 November 2013

Hahaha..so, funny.. Keep writing..! !

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Payal Parande 15 June 2013

hilarious.....i am still laughing....a good write indeed

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Captain Cur 09 June 2013

Misplaced articles usually turn up where we least expect them. This poem made me laugh.

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