After All Said And Done. Poem by Terry Collett

After All Said And Done.

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After Friday choir practice
in the church

after the other members
had gone to the vestry

to ready themselves for home
she stood in the darkened church

looking at the altar
and the high windows

where only moonlight
shone through

and she said to you
we'll stand here one day

and get married maybe
and say our vows

and there will be
our families and friends

and the parson will say
kiss the bride and you will

and she smiled
and looked at you

standing in the quiet church
and you said

some years off maybe
we're only fourteen

and still at school
and we've got to get pass

your mother yet
like trying to get a ball

by a fat goalie
who fills the net

but she just shook her head
and smiled and said

don't be so negative
look on the positive side

look to the future
with bright eyes

and it seems strange now
and sad to look back

at that night
with you and she

standing in that aisle
in semi-dark

while outside
in the night sky

fate was working out
a different answer

where you
would marry others

and she would die
from cancer.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Deeks 18 March 2012

Never has a title stated so much truth to me...This starts off (to me) as a sermon of life and memories, which as life starts, full of possibilities and hope then rather surprisingly (as in life) the twists and gnarls hurt and cause pain... The last two lines holds so much significance to me... Sad and real. Thank you Karen

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