Aftears Poem by Manonton Dalan

Aftears



... there are few
who could unwind
and walk
the garden
with sweet smile

to smell roses
reaching out
to feel the warmest of
breath

then fade away
like a
dream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Irene 03 November 2021

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Hana K 11 October 2008

beautiful poem i give 9.8

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Aiswarya. T.anish 27 September 2008

it is a very good poem. i liked reading it. i like the line 'there are a few who could unwind and walk the garden with sweet smile.' it shows the beauty of a peaceful garden

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Short and beautiful poem for the few who can walk in the garden (of life) , enjoy the beauties and have a peaceful end there.A poem for dreamers.Thanks. I give a 9++ Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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Edna Javelosa 26 September 2008

moving on takes time..until then they could fade away and then walk again in the garden with sweet smile..life is a cycle..you can begin from bottom then up again and start from there and down again.....i can begin reading from bottom of your poem and up down...awesome write.

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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