Treasure Island

Indira Renganathan


Affliction


Stroke of a heartless son
Desirably remained an unschooled rascal
Plunging ischemic into a father's mind
Sweep-swindling all the travail of asset
The father's cumulated..

Educated brat, conspiring wife
Plotted to be berserk
Paralysing the father
To be bundled empty of life
The father's cumulated..

Modern daughter of arrogance
Literate to be modest in secret eloping
Stupefying yearnest alliance -negotiations
To attack the heart's wishes
The father's cumulated..

Disagreeing a wedlock of orthodoxality
Bunking in spinsterhood of overweighed hubris
Modern daughter of arrogance
Commanding the pressure of patience
The father's cumulated..

Bound to the familial chores
Honest fathers await laudable lores
Distressed fathers gifted with sores..
Still mean the men of bad scores?

Submitted: Saturday, September 13, 2008

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  • Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (8/29/2009 10:18:00 PM)

    'pettha manam pitthu..pillai manam kallu' very well said mam...i did see it happen to my dad
    please read my poems and give your encoraging comments
    'a baby's chat'
    'a beautiful dawn'
    'a rise and fall of humanity'
    'as fighter and fought - lord krishna' (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (8/9/2009 12:05:00 PM)

    Great piece, well penned a message to all parents of the world, like myself, which I am going through right now...you got my vote, thanks for sharing again, Love and Peace, Romeo (Report) Reply

  • Winnie Angel (7/30/2009 6:55:00 PM)

    A clear and frank picture of our modern family..the disrupt relations...winnie...nice write... (Report) Reply

  • Antonio Liao (4/20/2009 2:20:00 AM)

    a wonderful....a true and genuine poem of a willing
    sacrifice of each parents....a freedom to choose...and
    love to show the deep meaning of loving a child...
    hope and pray that this will be read....to all parent
    through the world today...a 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Palas Kumar Ray (9/22/2008 2:59:00 PM)

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    Truth spoken with a lot of anger setting your words ablaze.Will someone hear?
    ______________________________________________________________________10+ (Report) Reply

  • Kesav Easwaran (9/21/2008 8:37:00 AM)

    rightly said, Indira...these are the gifts from their heirs apparent the modern day fathers, sincere and sore, would accumulate as reward in their lives...a very good poem 10+ (Report) Reply

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