Affection I Versify Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Affection I Versify

Rating: 5.0


Affection spirited like the ocean
Vast I versify for my emotion
To picture in her eyes, how devotion
I have for her heart, moves as the lotion
Soothing to mine, which became inflated
With gladness that is sun-generated
To sate my brain to be captivated.
My delight she will view is animated.
But..., words have failed to obey my design,
Even my muse has announced to resign.
What evades my verse for her intended,
Shall not prevent me to have brain mended.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kafil Uddin Raihan 04 August 2009

Nice poem.......Well expressed......cheers with 10+++

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Sandra Martyres 04 August 2009

Nice piece with perfect rhyming...10

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Luwi Habte 11 August 2009

cool as usual nice poem Luwi

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Catrina Heart 25 September 2009

Beautiful interesting composition shared my friend...Thanks! ! ! 10

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wael karameh 18 August 2009

clear, interesting and nice.......... wael.

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Ravi Sathasivam 17 August 2009

Beautiful. Well penned Enjoyed

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rago rago 15 August 2009

nice and beautiful presentation.............

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Howard Johnson 12 August 2009

Enjoyed the poetic rhyming, thank you for sharing Obinna

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