Ae Hawa Tu Daakiya Ban Jaana........ Poem by shraddha shraddha the poetess

Ae Hawa Tu Daakiya Ban Jaana........

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Ae hawa aaj tu daakiya ban jaana,,
mere pyare bhai takbehna ka sandesaa pahuchaana...
pyaar bharaa ek paigaam usko de aana...
kuchh bhi krke uske hothon pr muskaan sajaana...

wo tera didi didi awaaz lagaana,,
chupke se fir kahin chhip jaanaa..
achanak saamne aakr mujhe daraana,,
dara diya khkar khilkhilaana....
aye hawaa use ye yaad dilaanaa...
ae hawaa aaj tu dakiyaa ban jaanaa........

khna usse-teri behna tujhe behad pyaar krti hai..
hr pal darwazaa dekh bs tera hi intzaar krti hai...
teri hi khushiyon ki kaamna baar baar krti hai..
use jakr ye sab batlaana..
ae hawa aaj tu daakiya ban jaana.....

sooraj sa tu hameshaa jagmagaaye,,
chand ki trh andheron m roshni ban jaaye...
chahe tu jahaan bhi jaaye sda hi kaamyabi paaye..
hr ghadi hr waqt tu muskuraaye,,
kisi gam ka saaya kabhi na tujhpar chhaye..
tujhpar aane wali hr takleef mujhpar aa jaye..
raakhi pr meri duaayein ustk pahuchaanaa.......
ae hawa aaj tu daakiyaa ban jaana.......

shraddha..........

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this poem i wrote on rakhi for my little brothr...as he was not there with me at that time....so these were some feelings which i drawn in the form of a poem........
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shraddha The Poetess 06 September 2013

i agree bhaiya.......relationship of brother sisite is one of the most precious relation........... thnx a lot for ur commment

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Ramesh Rai 06 September 2013

on love of brother n sister i hv posted three poem viz didi n two r on rakhi plz read. your one is xlent like honey dripping.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 May 2014

The festival I like much is Rakhsha Bandhan. I was amused to read this poem. Though I am a muslim but we used to celebrate it in India.

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Shaik Mehboob 15 September 2013

superb poem shraddha ji, , , very touchy too.

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Utsav Patel 07 September 2013

Beautiful indeed... Well written... Keep it up

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 September 2013

Beautiful poem for brother on Rakhi day...It is really fantastic. I am sure you brother would have loved to read it. Loved it Shraddha.

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Shraddha The Poetess 07 September 2013

thnx ramesh sir and thnx ankur bhaiyaaa and shubham bhaiyaaaaaaa

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