... Adultery...A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins Poem by Eyan Desir
... Adultery...A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins
In the circle of love
Wrapped with loyal bonds
Clever demons play their songs
In mortals weakness moments
The tunes of love and lust
Creeps within their core
Silencing all their morals
Rendering these mortals
To their emotions
Clever demons laugh
Whiles their legs splits apart
And a sinner rushes in
To eat the forbidden fruit
04 August 2009 Copyright © ® Eyan desir. All rights reserved
Hey man.. how are you? ? after a long time turn to your page.. after S.L and Windies ate a kangaroo curry! ! ! ! ! ..... hey very good write.. very creative and nice to read.., , very interesting title.. poem didn't disappoint either, .. very good..! ! ! 10.. cheers// best wishes Shan
eye opener.. temptations are just nearby.... sweet and appealing.... 10 Maia
excellent lyric metaphor: ''The tunes of love and lust Creeps within their core Silencing all their morals Rendering these mortals To their emotions'' and excellent poem, thank you for sharing.................10+++++
great poem it is very desribable in all ways great job again and very creative keep up the good work
yah, that was straight to the point! ...i dig your direction and intention...you're pretty dang good with words!
absolutely loved it..short yet it sent shivers down my spine..if you read any of my poems, i have adultery down to a tee.10
its really good but all girls open ther legs..lol but great poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Initial liners were really good.Well Expressed.