Adorable Night... Poem by hazem al jaber

Adorable Night...

Rating: 3.1


Adorable night...







so lovely to storm into a night...

and to rip it its endless times..

to hide its moon through their sweet bodies..

sweet naked lovers` bodies...

lovers that deserves to irrigates their desires...

through into each other...

to enjoy one the other...

and to stay all a night...

giving, creating and making a great activities....

making their love....



so lovely to stay every night...

all a night with a lover...

watching a moon and its stars...

and passing a night while they don`t know how it passed...

through their harmony kisses...

their lips which never get apart...

their bodies which gives a power with no stop...



its so lovely to share feelings...

to make it love with no shame...

to dive into, trying to reach a holy places...

holy sweet place into each others...

to run a risk one into the other...

to burst out all desires together...

to get a pretty poetic sweet night...

through a bodies fights for each other with no impossible...

till they lose their power and fell sleeps with no choice...



then...

how its lovely those bodies to meet again...

while they still so close together...

there into their dreams...

to start it with an endless dream..

as the another day will never rise again...



by: hazem02@yahoo.com

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a beautiful and romantic poem...well expressed

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Catrina Heart 30 June 2009

such a lovely stirring craft as always my friend. Nice poetic pictorial....10

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Marieta Maglas 30 June 2009

a beautiful romantic poem, Hazem, all these words vibrate like a violin.....10+++

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Saadat Tahir 30 June 2009

hoa....there...hold it man...its very very potent as a potion great feeling and a vivivd description of the paces reminds me of another poem.......candid raw emotion...portrayed as such POEM: *Hymen Splitting-Lillian Susan Thomas well good luck to you in your amorous persuits...well written cheers

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Lillian Thomas 30 June 2009

very sensual poem, good word choice, lots o emotional content. Not easy to handle but you do it very well.

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Oma Bergeron 16 August 2009

A supper written poem with the meaning of all lovers so close to one another, loving in stride all night until they are give out and fall asleep- rest to gether until morning and wake up together. Sweet love! !

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Maria Barbara Korynt 11 July 2009

Oooo! Very interesting, nice and romantic poem. I like it. Thank you for remembering.10v. Maria Barbara Korynt

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Vijay Menon 08 July 2009

nice poem quite bold 10+++

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Anjali Sinha 05 July 2009

hmm romance is in the air good write anjali

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romantic as always...full of love...thanks best regards, jdh

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