Admiration Poem by Jhane Reyes

Admiration

Rating: 3.8


From simple admiration
Then always in my imagination
Till become my inspiration
To reach my ambition

You’re like a mornin’ sun
Which give light and fun
To make my work well done
And the boredom has gone

Just think of you makes me happy
Even the hardest work takes easy
And sweet smile goes me crazy
Feels that I’m in world of fantasy

To be with you is big surprise
Like won a jackpot prize
I hope my dream come true
That will you love me too

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 23 October 2011

Amazing! Another of your powerful and well penned write that clearly gives you away! Beauty radiates through your poignant writes and obviously Poetry runs in your blood! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more such talented writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from Bronx, NY...

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Ency Bearis 06 July 2008

as you write like this you will hit that jackpot of love...good poem, nicely written Best Wishes, Ency Bearis

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