Admiration Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Admiration

Rating: 5.0


Admiration
To those
Who love and live
With faith and re-live

Admiration
For those
Who believe in sacrifice?
Stand dedicated with promises

Admiration
To those
Who wants to serve the poor?
With no lip services but actual workers

They may stand all tall
Receive tumultuous call
Respect and honor wherever they go
It is small gesture on our part to flow

Little bit of compassion and love to arrive
For down trodden and deprived
That shall be called real service
You may have life to spend at ease

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2012

Admiration To those

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2012

aryaindia Very thought provoking views and feelings. Tfs

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2012

aryaindia Very thought provoking views and feelings. Tfs

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2012

Awesome Antoinette Townsend19 minutes ago True words! ! ! Great poet! ! ! Very inspiring! ! ! Comment +1 deep

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2012

subtle incantations27 minutes ago i like it a lot Comment +1 THIS IS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL TRUTH..............

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2012

Delilah Blueness34 minutes ago MUCH LOVE TO YOU. KEEP IT UP ANGEL! ! : 0)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2012

BRUCE RANDALL18 minutes ago I believe I understand the message our poet is trying to convey, but I think something is being lost in translation. There are contextual and syntactical errors in proper english that if corrected, in my opinion, will greatly improve this insightful poetic endeavor.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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