Adieu Crevasse Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Adieu Crevasse

Rating: 5.0


(dedicated to a creative poet at poemhunter, Mr. Aldo Kraas)

Albatross air one’s views
Alfalfa on all fours
Alder aligns
Alight

Cuirass crystallizes
Crossing crouches
Crocus cruises
Crux

(a modern poem)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonya Florentino 14 May 2009

hmmm very modern, but i'm sure Mr. Kraas will understand....

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Catrina Heart 14 May 2009

fine write for Aldo Kraas.........lovely dedication..........

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Subbaraman N V 15 May 2009

Short and effective................

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Juan Carlos Abeti 15 May 2009

short, direct, great job as usual

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Anthony Foster 15 May 2009

Informative and short, short as short is, good write 10

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Seema Chowdhury 21 May 2009

a nice tribute to a friend.

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Louis Rams 17 May 2009

KRAAS LIKE AN ALBATROSS IS ONE OF A KIND. GOOD WRITE

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Aldo Kraas 17 May 2009

Thank you very much for the poem It is very different

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I really enjoyed the crispness of your modern poem

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Luwi Habte 15 May 2009

nice poem short and descriptional well done! ! !

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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