Adieu Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Adieu

Rating: 4.0


(dedicated to Adalynn Cobb, a poet friend at poemhunter)

Drizzle makes afternoon gloom
Shepherds bestow valuable blithe
When you perform Voces Intimae again?
Anyhow, blaze of Seoul just begin
Young maiden’s also watering azalea
I personally yearn your caress

(inspired by Guns ‘N Roses’ November Rain)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ric Bastasa 25 November 2008

'Ada tahi ada lalat.'

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Sandra Fowler 25 November 2008

Vivid poem pictures created by the mood of the music which inspired this short piece. Kind regards, Sandra

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 25 November 2008

When you perform Voces Intimae again? correct it thus: When did you...... the poem is sounding good

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Colm Hayes 25 November 2008

The song Rocks, this poem ROCKS, well done

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 25 November 2008

a well written musical piece!

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Catrina Heart 17 May 2009

lovely written poem...........Great!

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premji premji 29 December 2008

wonderful lines...enjoyed........

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Sarwar Chowdhury 04 December 2008

Fine imagery indeed! ......10+

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Anjali Sinha 04 December 2008

well penned liked it ++++10 anjali

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Great poem great song... I like this one a lot Krista

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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