Addicted Poem by Keli Mims
Addicted
[Written July 14th 2010]
How can I help myself,
Because I'm starting to fall.
I don't know where but,
My name is being called,
And I feel addicted.
I want to feel whatever,
Whatever I can.
Even something new,
Something I don't understand,
And it gets me addicted.
It makes me want it,
Want to know enough.
Of what this is,
Whatever I need like love,
And I become addicted.
It's so unnatural,
The way I feel,
The way we are,
How I have no fear,
And I'm almost addicted.
How I see you look at me,
How it just feels right.
Whenever we talk it's great,
From good morning to good night,
I get addicted to you.
This is well written. The sense of submission from the opening line, 'How can I help myself because I am starting....' is very moving. Well done
Loved the last line of every stanza. Increasing state of addiction. Addicted to love. A wonderful poem! ; D
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 8:18:53 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I love it...The poem can go for any situation...you just don't know how addicted you are to something until you try to live without it...Whenever you have time plz read my new suspense poem 'Little Johnny'