Addicted Poem by David Barlow

i like ur poem. Good work! From, Colombia Galvis

I love the simplicity of your words David They are plain and simple yet are coupled with a passion the lady would understand. She would understand because I'm sure she feels the same way about you. You are both fortunate people and whatever you feel towards one another, be it friendship or tenderness, just wallow in your newly found happiness... Angela Norris

BRAVO! BRAVO! Fabulous!

Now that's what I call an honset man. hehehehe Say it as it is and get an honest response. Another gem from you.

'...Like a Moth to a candle flame...' says so much, but worth reading on. This one, too, personalizes a something that can be applied to almost anything one feels inexplicably drawn to. Nice work.

This is very sweet, nicely structured and without pretension. Addicted is a perfect title. love, Allie xxxx

David, simple lines, but great story within each. Top marks and thanks for sharing them my friend. David