Adam And Eve Apple Fantasy Poem by Sherif Monem

Adam And Eve Apple Fantasy

Rating: 4.3


I am a bit bored Adam
I am a bit bored Eve
Let's walk together in the garden
This beautiful garden of Eden
It is the middle of the day Adam
It is the middle of the day Eve
Our tummies are hungry and empty
Let's have something to eat
Look Adam my dear honey
How wonderful this fruit tree
Oh this beautiful large Apple
No Eve this is the tree of knowledge
Look Eve there is sign in the sky
Can't you see? The Lord command
Don't eat from the apple tree
Ha Ha Ha
Who is that?
I am serpent of the garden
Listen Adam and Eve
Go pick the big shiny apple
Adam my honey do you hear me?
My stomach is aching
Go get me this wonderful apple
Eve I would not disobey the Lord
Oh Adam, oh honey
Do not seduce me Eve
Ooh Adam, Ooh Eve
Something happened after
we ate this forbidden apple
open our eyes, Adam hurry
Let's get some fig leaves
It is time to get some rest
to lay down under shaded tree
Adam let's have lovely babies
Eve let's have many and many
Let's fill our new world

Sunday, November 30, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: snake,apple,eden,eve,fantasy,garden,knowledge,lord
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Excellent work, love it 10+++

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I am bored too

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May I invite you, and all my poet friends, to read my poems (1) Eve and (2) The World Was Only Darker, which might interest all of you. Thank you

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Ramesh Rai 29 April 2015

Apple fantasy of Adam and EVE is nicely penned. Thanks for share

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Bri Edwards 09 July 2013

i always wondered what the real story was. i like it enough to send it to my poemlist. it was convenient that there was at least one fig tree as well. knowing adam, i don't think an apple leaf would suffice. and HERE we are TODAY. good thing i'm not a christian or i might be upset....maybe not.

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This story, this poem, is really male-chauvinistic, and disgusting. Why is it that it is always the woman who sins? I would like to wake you up to the fact that she has not sinned alone.

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I am bored Adam I am bored Eve Let's walk together in the garden It is afternoon Adam after all desires to befullfilled otherwise life will beboredom as ralized by them.. good work and very thoughtful for all the times tocome....10 read mine inflamed mind.. the sun.... how r u/

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