sherif monem

Rookie - 203 Points (Egypt)

Adam and Eve Apple Fantasy


I am bored Adam
I am bored Eve
Let's walk together in the garden
It is afternoon Adam
It is afternoon Eve
Our tummies are empty
Let's have something to eat
It is beautiful garden of Eden
How wonderful the fruit trees!
Adam look honey
This beautiful Apple tree
No Eve this is the knowledge tree
Look Eve there is sign in the sky
Can't you see?
Lord command 'Don't eat from the apple tree'
Ha Ha Ha
Who is that?
I am serpent of the garden
Listen Adam
Listen Eve
Go pick the big apple
from the tree
Adam my honey
Do you hear me?
My stomach is aching
go get me this delicious apple
Eve I would not disobey the Lord
Oh Adam
Oh Honey
You seduce me Eve
Ooh Adam
Ooh Eve
Something happened after
we ate the apple
Go Adam get some Fig leaves
Adam Let's rest
under the shaded tree
Adam let's have babies
Eve let's have off-springs

Submitted: Sunday, November 30, 2008
Edited: Thursday, May 28, 2009

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  • Veteran Poet - 4,807 Points Bri Edwards (7/9/2013 7:49:00 PM)

    i always wondered what the real story was. i like it enough to send it to my poemlist. it was convenient that there was at least one fig tree as well. knowing adam, i don't think an apple leaf would suffice. and HERE we are TODAY. good thing i'm not a christian or i might be upset....maybe not. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,846 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2009 9:14:00 PM)

    I am bored Adam
    I am bored Eve
    Let's walk together in the garden
    It is afternoon Adam
    after all desires to befullfilled otherwise life will beboredom as ralized by them.. good work and very thoughtful for all the times tocome....10

    read mine inflamed mind.. the sun.... how r u/ (Report) Reply

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