Activate The Better You Poem by Sandra Feldman

Activate The Better You

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The trouble with us Is,
That we try to think,
With some unfeeling thing,
Called a Brain,
That does not always guide us,
To the right domain,
It generally gives off evil thoughts,
Of destruction and others slain.

Think with your Soul,
Spiritualize, yourself,
Feel pity, kindness,
Of Love, the finest,
Towards others, brothers
We have but one life to live,
Live it in fullest harmony,
Learn not to take but to Give!

Tuesday, July 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eugene Levich 15 July 2014

If only everyone in this world thought like our Sandracita... what a nice place it would be!

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* Sunprincess * 20 July 2014

............love the thought....caring and sharing is most important....let's donate things to others....let's give when someone asks for something...and if someone looks sad or depressed....let's give them a kind word and a hug....maybe we can help them to smile again...

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Valerie Dohren 16 July 2014

Good advice Sandra - give me a loving soul over a cold brain any day.

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Chuy Amante 16 July 2014

I am so on board 15/16th That is still a sold A in my book Nice and long! I'm getting nervous ticks 666 is knocking run? Run!

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Jena Crowe 15 July 2014

I need to activate a better writing hand! You inspire me. This reminds me of a self-help book- -not in a bad way tho! You seem sincere.

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Mark Heathcote 15 July 2014

A very well rounded written; poem with a meaningful message.

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