Acid Bath Poem by Haley Revell

Acid Bath



Acid bath
Purple haze
Blue world
Psychotic daze
Confusion
A dream
Of immortality
Sent spinning
A fall from grace
To Shangri La
Justice sank
Into a maze
Fatal sin
Carnal desire
Where Death begins
To propagate
Entering a realm
Of forbidden tastes
Take in a new view
Of Fantasia
Welcome to my world
Of mysteries
My private sanctuary
Waterfall of eruption
Into seas of time
This is were
All the divine
Find peace
And begin to
Breathe
Inside the mind of
A Phantom
My demons
Are chasing me
Into a cage
Of my own silent
RAGE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ari Ryan 14 February 2011

i like this, nice. It's a little choppy but the message is clear and the rhyming is good. keep it up :)

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