Aching Pain Poem by Dianna R. Evans

such a sad poem. It brings the heartbreaking reality of unrequited first love and the fact your 'love' may ignore you and your feelings. Trust me, I know the feeling first hand. Continue writing, for you say the truth, even when its bitter and not sweet. gr8 work

thanks for the comments it means alot to me and i will continue writing thanks! !

Beautifully written, your a very talented poet! Simply Brilliant :)

i like this one alot

thanks u guys that means alot to me i like ur guys poems too :)

I love writing it makes me feel ok... I write my feelings and it turns into these poems

I like that you are'nt afraid to write your experiences, either first hand or second, down even when they may be ugly you mold them into something you beautiful with your words. There's a real sense of voice in this one Keep on writing keep on improving

Wow i foundd a new favorite to keep on read from let em know when u post new poems

thanks dylan :) lol

Another brilliant write, this one is very moving, keep it up