Aches Of Life Poem by ramesh rai

Aches Of Life

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Fish swims enthusiastically in water
The duck gazes meditatively at swimming fish
Both lust for long life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 10 September 2013

Delightfully short but sweet and true.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 September 2013

Beautiful images creating deep impressions in the mind.

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Hazel Durham 13 September 2013

So true we all wish for a long and happy life! Lovely write!

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Marvin Brato 01 November 2013

Meaningful....life is survival. Congratulation for wining the recent contest sir, you deserved it!

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Lenny Camacho 24 October 2013

I see the irony: both long for a long live, however, only one will survive the encounter; one becomes ethereal, the other remains terrenal. Balance and Chaos

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Valsa George 29 September 2013

The thought whether we will live long or die prematurely remains an ache with most humans as well as other creatures! A cute little poem!

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Yasmin Khan 24 September 2013

All creatures love life and death is as horrible for them as for us, nice write

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Heather Wilkins 14 September 2013

just as us humans we all want a long and eventful life. nice write

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