Ache Poem by Arwen Lee CW

Ache

Rating: 2.8


I wonder how

I wonder why

Each beat of my heart

Lashes me with your smile

I feel ache

I feel pain

Not a slash of a sword

But a thousand stabs

I am puzzled

I am lost

In such a torture

which mixes with pleasure

You are near

You are far

My dear

My star

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 23 October 2008

near to mind but far to sight, this 'love star'...good piece 10

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David Threadgold 16 October 2008

Very well written. thanks for the read. Regards Dave T

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Arwen Lee CW

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Kuantan, Malaysia
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