Accident Poem by aung si myanmar

Accident

Rating: 3.5


While I'm traveling to my goal
Like the velocity of flying arrow...

Unhopefully within uncover heart,
New and pleasant emotion arises.
But furtively I store it in the dark.

Yes, I am a teenager.
Yes, this is nature.
But, I shouldn't do like the teenager.
But, I shouldn't accept this nature.

My brain is full with hunger.
My life is full with competitors.
Responsibilities are on my shoulders.
Difficulties are my teachers.
Enemies are sensual pleasures.

Sure, I love her so much.
But, there's no time for my heart.
I dare to solve it with tolerance.
I dare to neglect it by myself.
Let it be just an accident.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tiger Lily Love 06 October 2012

I really enjoyed this poem! hands down favorite line: My brain is full with hunger. My life is full with competitors. Responsibilities are on my shoulders. Difficulties are my teachers. Enemies are sensual pleasures Keep up the good work!

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Hans Vr 04 October 2012

Wonderful write expressing a certain restlessness. Most of our accident have a definite purpose. Responsibility can give satisfaction Whatever, choose to enjoy what you are doing and all will go well.

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Sunny Rose 27 September 2012

i can relate dude coz your poem's so alive

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Eindaray Kyaw 28 August 2012

You know, you can never escape from that accident! Even though this is an accident for you....it has been firmly established within your heart without your permission And also even that permission can't be allowed without your eager mind! Am I right?

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