Acceptance On A Summon Poem by Indira Renganathan

Acceptance On A Summon

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Every minute I summoned to you
Every minute I waited for you
But only disappointment sickened me
Till last minute nothing meant to me
Now it is amazing being with you
Swear by that moon you won't leave
For your radiant presence of blue
Need to change me not to grieve
Come home or this be the home
Let us live filially part and part
Of a mother with a son lovesome
Modelling a life where nothing'll interrupt
I shall give you whatever Yashoda gave
All the delicacies of milk, you crave
Address me mom as you did to Yashoda
Spend my days like you did with Yashoda
'Cry not' said the God-child Krishna
Stayed back. My piety to little Krishna
Turned meaningful; life got salvaged

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rema Prasanna 02 July 2008

It is a beautiful feeling motherly feeling to little Krishna.. A fine poetry connecting God to heart. Rema

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Kesav Easwaran 16 July 2008

a mother blessed is yashodha...for she had the fortune of bringing up in discipline and love the ONE whose manifestation as a blue bodied- thataka, of course- blue eyed child taught mankind discipline and love through Bhagavadh Geetha, The Song of God...natural, every wise woman aspires to be a yashodha...10

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Shimon Weinroth 29 September 2008

a summons is also a calling both heart wretching end encouraging, you are still saddled with the responsability a lovely echoing of emotions deeply personal, thanks for sharing, all the best Shimon

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Rabi Anata 14 August 2009

To me this is all complex, but it flows so well and the meaning is interesting. I like it a lot.: ]

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a very moving verse! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Ravi A 17 March 2009

A nice work. This is what every mother expects from their children.

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Chitra - 27 December 2008

a deep poetic connection established with the Higher name Heres wishing you and your near ones a Happy 2009 Cheers Chitra

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Shimon Weinroth 29 September 2008

a summons is also a calling both heart wretching end encouraging, you are still saddled with the responsability a lovely echoing of emotions deeply personal, thanks for sharing, all the best Shimon

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