Acceptance Poem by ritty patnaik

Acceptance

Rating: 3.9


accept all,
that life gives
in playfull mood.
sign on its tears,
on its blood.
accept the love,
and also the scar with it.

while climbing,
the ladder of dreams
i have fallen
many a times
accepting,

i have stopped sometimes
midway,
held on to dear life,
not letting it escape
from my embrace.

i know it has to go,
still i accept.it
with equanimity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lii Taito 09 July 2009

This is really nice and enjoyable.

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Bob Blackwell 22 July 2009

Wonderful advice from a wise lady. Bob

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Ejaz Khan 12 July 2009

A write pointing to the fact that not always it's clever to resist, acceptance of the reality is the only right way at times. A message that needs to be remembered!

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 10 July 2009

yes...a simple poem...but a great message within. its very difficult to accept.....very difficult.

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Rakesh Bedi 09 July 2009

..... i know it has to go....; i think it to be the nicest thing which one Should remember!

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Surya . 09 July 2009

really nice and phylosophical this para is most meaningfuli have stopped sometimes midway, held on to dear life, not letting it escape from my embrace.' voted10 surya '

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