Louis Cecile

Rookie - 5 Points (London)

Acceptance


Infectious smile has infected tears
The laughter strikes with spears
I am not dear and they are not sincere
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Comments about this poem (Acceptance by Louis Cecile )

  • Freshman - 816 Points Leslie Philibert (3/16/2014 5:41:00 AM)

    Like this, with its clever internal rhyme in L3...good work. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,489 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/26/2014 8:51:00 AM)

    Imaginative imagery implodes in powerful poem. Well done my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 314 Points Hardik Vaidya (3/16/2013 1:10:00 AM)

    Louis Ceclile this is an epic, very well felt at your end, the beauty of any poem is not in into construct, it lies in the poets intellectual grasp through his soul. Very well done. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,001 Points Marieta Maglas (6/4/2012 4:21:00 PM)

    Noble feelings very well expressed in this great poem-thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (5/25/2012 12:36:00 AM)

    Awesome flow in this great poem and the rhyme is good too...

    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 399 Points Rekha Mandagere (4/26/2012 3:10:00 AM)

    Excellent write. there is nice flow and rhythm here :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arild Ertsland (3/16/2012 6:29:00 PM)

    Awesome rhyming a very smooth flow in your poem, Louis.Outstanding work! Arild (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Lawrence H (3/16/2012 4:31:00 PM)

    Louis, nice and very good rhyme poem. Is this a Haiku poem? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,206 Points Ramesh Rai (2/13/2012 10:38:00 PM)

    xlent. i liked it.For when I stop the stage is gone (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Heyyou Boy (1/9/2012 6:49:00 PM)

    Short and to the point. I like these. Great poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Vipins Puthooran (10/1/2011 3:59:00 AM)

    Magnificient poem...
    I like the rhyme in it....
    Well written...poignant write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (9/18/2011 1:32:00 AM)

    Truly said and very heartfelt expressions to endear the readers with impressionism.I liked it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Swarnendu Biswas (8/10/2011 9:21:00 AM)

    nice expression, few words it contains but extensive sense it creates.nice work, keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (8/7/2011 12:58:00 PM)

    An impressive write freely expressing the true feelings of the soul through a few poignant words! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented works! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 89 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (9/22/2010 11:05:00 AM)

    ‘I must perform /For when I stop the stage is gone’ ~ Like mythological sphinx who rose from ashes and started flying …bytes of teaching in economy great write… thanks for sharing Hon'ble Poet Louis
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,489 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (3/7/2010 8:11:00 AM)

    You have said so much in so few words. Sincere acceptance is food for the soul. Well done my friend. (Report) Reply



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