Abstract Thoughts Poem by ritty patnaik

Abstract Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


an abstract dream
of early morning
fanning emotions
skyrocketting
the feeling of love,
falls apart with
the opening of eyes.

an abstract hope,
of happiness,
lurks in some corner
of the heart.
in the belief that one day
all will chage for better.
a new world will arise
out of chaos and devastations
and the glory of almighty
will spread words
of love and peace.

an abstract faith
of belief and nonbelief,
engulfs all, in doubt,
leaves one derailed in doubt,
to listen to the world outside
or the soul within.
when one does not percieve
what one sees
or refuse to accept,
and fathom the truth.

an abstract picture forms
in the minds eye,
looms large....
and beckons to
unknown time and space,
fails to touch
the texture of thoughts.

a abstract feeling forms in mind,
which has no beginning or end,
looming larger than life,
foreboding, yet inviting,
to feel a stroke of luck,
which will alleviate,
the mortal wounds,
of deep sorrow in the heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 10 October 2009

THESE ABSTRACT THOUGTHS DO OCCUR FROM TIME TO TIME! AS LONG AS WE DONOT LET THE NEGATIVE THOUGHTS OVERSHADOW THE POSITIVE ONES, WE ARE ON SAFE GROUNDS! FAITH & HOPE KEEPS US GOING! 10! -RAJ

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Ejaz Khan 04 October 2009

A lovely write, full of wisdom, revealing your zeal. loved it! 10/10

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Jean Dament 03 October 2009

You described what abstract thoughts & feelings create well in this lovely poem. An enjoyable read. Thanks. Ravensong

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