Kevin Carney

Rookie (New York)

Abstract - Poem by Kevin Carney

Eyes look through the mirror…
Conscious is the brain.
No more illusions…
The reality of life wins out…
Dark and hazy.
Pick an object, try to concentrate.
Lay it on a plain…
Grant the reality.
In all its wealth.
Peace within the soul lies.
The drugs no longer induce.
Falseness of god and trust.
A universal belief.
Peace of one.
The sleep of lost souls.
Harmony in you.
Balance the mind.
Ripen the soul.
It’s something you thought you might have lost.
Look into the mirror.
Look at yourself.
Study the emotional expression.
You once knew…
So far away and lost.
Gain and insight…
Tell me what you see.


Comments about Abstract by Kevin Carney

  • Bernard Snyder Bernard Snyder (11/25/2015 10:20:00 PM)

    Powerful poem sir. Very deep, yet easy to comprehend. Great job! (Report) Reply

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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (11/25/2015 7:28:00 AM)

    A beautiful meaningful poem with nice imagery. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/25/2015 5:41:00 AM)

    It’s something you thought you might have lost.
    Look into the mirror.
    Look at yourself.
    Study the emotional expression.
    You once knew…
    So far away and lost.
    Gain and insight…
    Tell me what you see. (Report) Reply

  • Shah Surja Shah Surja (11/25/2015 5:31:00 AM)

    Tell me what you see....... (Report) Reply

  • Paul Brookes Paul Brookes (11/25/2015 3:25:00 AM)

    A very vivid poem full of colour and spice (Report) Reply

  • Bert Bell Bert Bell (10/20/2010 12:54:00 AM)

    Very beautiful poetic thoughts, Kevin, ending up with two killer last lines. A lot of power in these well-chosen words. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Grace Miller (lost In The Dark /3) (9/26/2010 2:41:00 PM)

    ITs a good poem i like it i say it would give alot of heart (Report) Reply

  • Poetic Soul (8/30/2010 8:42:00 PM)

    A well penned write and vividly expressed...well done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 30, 2010



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