Absence Poem by Neela Nath Das

Absence

Rating: 4.3


This morning is bright
With glowing sun overhead.
Cool breeze, chirping of birds- -
And a picture of living busy
World is opening its vista
Before my eyes.
But, I feel a blankness
An absence of something, someone
I love, yet I don't....

Monday, December 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 22 December 2014

Love can fill any void! The practice of giving it is a divine activity!

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Sekharan Pookkat 01 January 2015

Absence reminds presence

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Lyn Paul 30 December 2014

.... Something may be missing, yet always be open for a new beginning! Thank You Neela

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Rajesh Thankappan 28 December 2014

When something is missing in life, the whole of the universe may seem empty. Deep emotion captured by your pen!

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Mj Lemon 24 December 2014

This poem captures a moment perfectly. Brilliant.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 December 2014

emotional drop flowing smooth.loved it.

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