Above All Poem by Aden Orie

I like standing tall...

pretty good poem and expresses pretty good

I like how it was expressed. Alot of lessons written. I like the part that says 'You have to slip Before you fall' It is sooo true, I take that as, do not assume anything'

yeah that one line saying that you have to slip before you fall is very good. i love this one nice job!

Very nice thoughts and connections.

let s this words above all. :)

The lines you used are very good. I want to read this over and over again. Very Good!

Simple but profound. Keep Writing.

You have to slip Before you fall You have to stand Before you’re tall great lines. I like this one a lot. great job. Becca

For a boy of your age this poem sounds highly matured voices; total surrender to God; it is not easy to achieve.......kudos. Great poem