About (Pre) Destination Poem by ion untaru

About (Pre) Destination

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To the birth of their son
mother begged fate
to have part of a
long life
country good-looking lad
and to know what
remained unknown to her - happiness
father in exchange
wished a high, sturdy child
with a heart of gold

But the fatal sisters
predestinated him to suffer

(translated from romanian)

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dr veenaa rai 05 August 2009

thank god we can not play god.its better to let destiny play it's role...nowadays, girls are a better bet as child for they care, being emotional by nature, , , u have given a good picture of what really happens inside human minds, a craving for a male child.. well written, sir

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Sameer Ahmed 17 April 2009

The wishful thoughts of Mother and Father, the two divine souls are natural and depict their love and concerns for the newborn Son....But the poem seems to hightlight the Myth of Foreordaining that appears to be fulfilled by the ruinous sisters in this case......

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