# Abode Of Gods... Poem by Mamta Agarwal

# Abode Of Gods...

Rating: 2.4


Sun filtering warmth
Through Silver Oak trees,
As I lay
Resting my head
Against
The trunk….


Only sound
Of Holy Ganges,
Gurgling in the vicinity…
Birds paying
Homage quietly
From the top of tree…
In God’s abode,
Hrishikesh

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 December 2008

A beautiful display of resplendent imagery...and i think, possibly an apropos''PICTORIAL''tribute to the famous, and admired Indian filmaker, who passed in 2006, at the age of 84..... Hrishikesh Mukhurgee? Very Fine Work, Mamta. FjR

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premji premji 29 December 2008

mamtaji... poetic visuals... i am resting there on your poetic lap... listening to the most beautiful lullaby 10 votes

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Indira Babbellapati 30 December 2008

you took me on a pilgrimage while sitting in the routine comfort of my room...

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Shymal Chakraborty 31 December 2008

Respected Mamtaji, Nice creation. It is enough to reach Risikesh through the waves of you poem.... Abode of God.....Regds/shymal

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 January 2009

Scriptures and elders say that there is always an associated sernity at abodes of God, be it a temple, church or a masjid. For a second I felt that I missed a good piligrimage for a very long time.

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Bob Blackwell 10 January 2009

Your moment of peace, the sights, the sounds are wonderful......in the lap of the Gods. Bob

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Andrew Blakemore 09 January 2009

Beautiful words Mamta, terrific poem. Best wishes, Andrew

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Raj Nandy 31 December 2008

A befitting poem for commencing the New Year 2009. -Raj Nandy

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Moushumi moushumi 31 December 2008

As i witnessed the same & recapitulating the same. Very pure verse. Happy New Year.

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