Abandonded Poem by Monkey Bubbles

Abandonded

Rating: 5.0


You abandoned me on this cold, dark road.
Now I go every day all alone.
Not a single thing I own.
I couldn't take it I fell to my knees.
Another one of lives cold hard fees.
No more, that is the last time I will fall for this trick called trust.
All will have good times as well as the bad times but all that is left for me is bad to be had.
Besides the bad all I have left is this impossible code,
because you abandoned me on this cold, dark road.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 03 April 2009

Raw emotion pours down the page, select words give this a deep impact. Nice work

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Monkey Bubbles 03 April 2009

is that a good thing or a bad thing?

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Joseph Poewhit 03 April 2009

Get that lost feeling from the words.

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