(abandoment Poem) Abandon Poem by Ace Of Black Hearts

(abandoment Poem) Abandon

Rating: 4.7


The blood of man, oh the blood of man.
In internal conflict just trying fight it.
I don't want anyone holding my hand never did.
Just another cry to live.
Tell me now can you hear it.
In all it's beauty, in all it's substance.
Just a promise, just a long dead promise.
It already forgotten, I don't live in fairy tales.
Anger in, a smile out.
A tear drop becomes the rain.
It covers my face.
It hides my secrets.
A man whose heart has been long broken.
Memories of the yesterday turn into the ashes of today.
No vulnerabilities.
No weaknesses.
No exposure in the direct sunlight.
Becoming the creature in the darkness.
The hero in disguise.
A mask that warps the tides.
No confidant in which to confide.
No one I can truly trust.
No never again.
Absolute abandonment.
Tell me now can you feel it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vishal Sharma 24 April 2014

Great poem, nice write x)

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Shania K. Younce 28 March 2014

Wondrous imagery. Bien!

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Wahab Abdul 11 December 2013

lovely poem with great flow... i love the poem very much..

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Roseann Shawiak 15 November 2013

Lonely poem, grabbed my heart and held it all the way through. Definitely could feel it. Fantastic poem on a sad subject. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Sandra Feldman 09 May 2013

Memories of the yesterday turn into the ashes of today Superb verse, lovely, lonely poem. Sometimes one line can define a thought better than a whole book, that is one of the things that I adore about Poetry, believe you me.

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