Aangan Mein Khud Ko Aaj Sulane Chala Hoon Main Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Aangan Mein Khud Ko Aaj Sulane Chala Hoon Main

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Shabnam se dil ki aag bujhane chala hoon main,
Aangan mein khud ko aaj sulane chala hoon main.
Sargoshian karoon ga sitaron se rat bhar,
Thandi hawa ko geet sunane chala hoon main.
Aakash per uroon ga main badal ke sath sath,
Chanda se chandni ko churane chala hoon main.
Juhi ke har shabbo ki khshboo liye huey,
Is rat ko aroos banane chala hoon main.
Woh door aasman pe jo pardon mein hay chupi,
Usko zameen ki goud mein lane chala hoon main.
Kal rat mere sath thi soyee na sari rat,
Phir rat aa gayee hay jagane chala hoon main.
Uske hassen jism ki ranaian na pooch,
Tan man mein phir ek aag lagane chala hoon main.
Gustakhion pe meri woh naraz ho gayee,
Aashiq hoon main bhi usko manane chala hoon main.
Woh subh ke bad jane kahan ja ke so gai,
Dekhi jo ek jhalak to jagane chala hoon main.
Dosheezgiye laila ke israr ki quasam,
Fitrat ko belibas banane chala hoon main.

Saturday, June 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An old poem written during youth age.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 17 September 2015

Sargoshian karoon ga sitaron se rat bhar, Great Ghazal with a beautiful imagery and sweet, flawless flow. Thanks. A quote: Thandi hawa ko geet sunane chala hoon main. Dosheezgiye laila ke israr ki quasam, Fitrat ko belibas banane chala hoon main.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 July 2014

Aapki kavita bahuth khoobsurat hai. Woh subh ke bad jane kahan ja ke so gai, Dekhi jo ek jhalak to jagane chala hoon main....Really beautiful flow of words. Loved reading it.

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Kirti Sharma 01 July 2014

Gustakhion pe meri woh naraz ho gayee, Aashiq hoon main bhi usko manane chala hoon main. Woh subh ke bad jane kahan ja ke so gai, Dekhi jo ek jhalak to manane chala hoon main. so beautiful! ! straight from your heart... just like your other poems! ! i liked it! !

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Khalida Bano Ali 30 June 2014

Sir, Thanks for your encouraging comments. This lovely poem expressing love for nature is beautiful and sweet.

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Savita Tyagi 30 June 2014

Bahut khoob. Thank you for sharing.

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