Aaj Banaam Kal: Today V/S Tomorrow (Hindi) Poem by Veer Dhiman

Aaj Banaam Kal: Today V/S Tomorrow (Hindi)

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Aaj kahe kal se,
Tu aaya kahan se?
Kal ne kaha aaj se,
Mujhse tu or tujhse main,
Yeh pare hai teri samajh se.

Aaj kahe kal se,
Kyon darte hain log tujhse?
Kal ne kaha aaj se,
Samaya hai kyonki bhoot mujhmein,
Yeh pare hai teri samajh se.

Kal kahe aaj se,
Tujh par kyon phool barse?
Aaj ne kaha kal se,
Samaya hai kyonki pyaar mujhmein,
Yeh pare hai teri samajh se.

Kal kahe aaj se,
Safalta kyon hai tujhse?
Aaj ne kaha kal se,
Jeet ka hai kyonki taaj mujhmein,
Yeh pare hai sabki samajh se.

Friday, September 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: competition
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem give a battle conversation between today & tomorrow... Tomorrow said to Today I've past as well as future also that's why I give birth to u & u give birth to me....(I.e. tomorrow & yesterday) ..... Tomorrow said that I've past as ghost that's why people afraid of me..... Next Today said to Tomorrow I've love that's why flowers are poured on me & I've the crown of victory i.e. not possible to understand by anyone.As think in today & live for today.....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veer Dhiman 17 September 2016

Thanks.... To all..... #VD

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Veer Dhiman 17 September 2016

Thank u very much Rajnish Manga & Kumarmani Mahakul..... #VD

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Rajnish Manga 16 September 2016

Beautiful imagery and an interesting dialogue between different phases of time. Very thoughtful. Thanks, Veer.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2016

There is wonderful competition between aaj and kal I mean today and tomorrow. Very interestingly you have presented this poem is very pleasing.10

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