S.zaynub Kamoonpuri


AAAAA.How the gambling haram harms


Our religion forbids all games of chance guys
We ain't allowed to indulge in that harmful enterprise
But no one can claim that gambling is at all wise

To more has gambling brought much misery and misfortune
Trying your luck that way brings bad luck to this money goon!

So goes without saying, no need of elaborating
that harmful and addictive are casinos and gambling

Quick money is the lure
but gambling is such an addictive trap
Indeed a vicious circle it is for sure
and you can 'bet' my warnings ain't crap!

The casino wheel doesn't always tip the scales in your favour many times
bringing down people from heights of immense affluence
to the abyss of poverty and monetary crimes
as gamblers act as if 'under the influence'

God only wished us to not be thus corrupt
for He foresaw most gamblers going bankrupt

To gamble is sin
and you don't always win

You might end up losing even the little you had
from bad to worse, tycoon hero to zero, alas too sad

I amn't uselessly rambling
Better stay away from gambling

A compulsive gambler frequenting the casino
might forever court ill-luck you know
from slot machine back to home, to and fro!
As to others his bucks shall go.

Submitted: Friday, September 06, 2013
Edited: Friday, September 06, 2013

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  • Freshman - 2,096 Points Anthony Di''anno (9/29/2013 12:47:00 PM)

    Well said. Having lost a months wages on the turn of a card I couldn't agree more. Gambling is addictive and ultimately leads to loss for the gambler. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 957 Points Lee Mack (9/16/2013 8:24:00 AM)

    I hear good voices singing in tune
    mus(t) practices prove much fruitfulness or
    mus(e) ? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,684 Points Ramesh Rai (9/12/2013 2:13:00 PM)

    a gambler forgets every moment of life. panch pandavas lost their wife even. grt message (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mohammad Tabatabaei (9/10/2013 9:32:00 AM)

    Dear Kamoonpuri
    Thak you for your comment on my poem Ecstasy. Your poem on gambling is beautiful. You have shown all harms and evils that stem from gambling. It is in fact one of the most destructive factor in life, matterialy and morally both. You have used a good rhythm. Good luck. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,465 Points Lyn Paul (9/10/2013 2:01:00 AM)

    Warning.. warning I hope those who need take note. A great write. Interested to know what made you think of this. Or do you like a little flutter.. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/7/2013 2:03:00 PM)

    Beautiful write on Gambling. Yes, gambling takes you into its swirl and will never get time to think where you are up to. Like the addiction one play and never stops till one loose...You have expressed this unique topic very well. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 178 Points Death Silence (9/7/2013 2:30:00 AM)

    I amn't uselessly rambling
    Better stay away from gambling. very nice....... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 603 Points Shahzia Batool (9/7/2013 2:07:00 AM)

    Jazaak Allah kher for this your nahi an il munker write Zaynub! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hasnain Aaqib (9/6/2013 11:21:00 PM)

    you are working for the welfare of humanity through the spread of religious values. And every sane person would appreciate your effort to see the world a better place to live. Keep on dear sis. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,621 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/6/2013 9:37:00 PM)

    Gambling is forbidden and unbelievable misery brought by the gamling To gamble is sin, and you don't always win
    A call for awareness for everybody universal call thank nice one (Report) Reply

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