A Yellow Moon Hung Low Will Only Tell The Tale Poem by kamryn chew

A Yellow Moon Hung Low Will Only Tell The Tale



There is a cloudy yellow moon
Hanging low in the sky tonight
It tells the tale of a young lady
With hopes that soar too high
For the people with closed minds
The ones who shoot her down
And try to make her lose the fight
Between pure happiness and sad sorrow
But that yellow moon tells the tale
Of a young lady who is happy in the end
Because her soul is worth more
Than people who do not think
And are sheep among the crowd
But oh, her triumph is her own
And her soul will soon move on
Much like that cloudy yellow moon
That is hung low in the sky
Which tells the tale of a young lady
With the hopes that soar too high

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 11 June 2009

Kamryn, I like this poem very much, it shows you are happy with what you believe. 'If you delight in your own talents, you will attain perfection' (The Geeta) One of your countryman wrote - 'If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hear a different drummer. Let him step to the music he hears, however measured or far away.' (H.D. Thoreau) Like you wrote ' do not be a sheep in a crowd'. You are a very wise lady, and write tales we all should read. Well done keep writing. Bob Blackwell

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