A World Of My Own Poem by David Harris

A World Of My Own

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When I write I go into
a world of my own.
My concentration is so strong
the rest of the world around me
just doesn’t belong.
The rest of the world vanishes
when my writing takes control
and I slip into a world of my own.
I only see the writing in front of me
everything else gets ignored.
My hearing does not detect
the voices surrounding me
when I drift into
a world of my own.
It is as though I’m hypnotised
by the words that I write
and all else never matters
disappearing out of sight
whenever I enter into
a world of my own.

27 September 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patrick McFarland 31 December 2008

Here in the States we call this 'being in the groove' (or at least we used to) . Nice job Dodgy Dave.

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JoAnn McGrath 29 December 2008

you really DIAL YOURSELF IN....: O) .....I've lost that feeling don't ask me where it went....all the other noises of life are too over powering right now I guess....maybe after I start feeling better things will come back

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Alison Cassidy 26 December 2008

From where I'm standing, this sounds like single-pointed concentration - something we Yoga teachers teach with gusto. There's nothing quite like following your creative thread and seeing where it takes you. Sometimes, the result is a poem - like this reather splendid one. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sheel Patel 24 December 2008

nice verse...cms frm ur emotion...

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