A Wonder You Are Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

A Wonder You Are

Rating: 4.9


Your voice, a dove to my ears
Works magic to end my fears
Your touch, a lamb to my hand
Easing with calmness to expand
What angel you are, who spurs
My soul to a realm of stars.

I, you touched into rebirth
As vales green anew with mirth
You covered me with sunlight
From the heavens, that lit bright
You showed me life can dwarf death
Showed me joy in Christmas wreath.

With wisdom, words of yours rains
Like the rock, they do remain
Standing, never the crumbled
Sand, whose spirit is bungled
A wonder, who like the morn
Awakens me with light on.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Kern 04 June 2009

'A Wonder You Are'. I enjoyed this poem very much :) 'like a dove to my ears' and 'Works Magic to End My Fears' very impressive words giving thanks to the ONE that loved us enough to give HIS life for us! ! ! thank you for sharing.

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avery beautiful writing..i love and enjoyed your touching words..well done 10++++

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Shoshana Green 07 July 2009

Gorgeous sweetness aliveness

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Nikunj Sharma 08 August 2009

Nice ans sweet poem...may the you stay with u, in u forever.pls read my poem called 'A coversation with you' and 'I'.

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Sonya Florentino 09 August 2009

Obinna, this one IS beautiful! my favorite lines.....'What angel you are, who spurs My soul to a realm of stars.'

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Yelena M. 03 June 2010

Such a gentle and soft piece, Obinna.Thanks for sharing! With best wishes, Yelena.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 March 2010

‘…What angel you are, who spurs/My soul to a realm of stars.’ Simply kaleidoscopic play of colorful words with inbuilt beautness…passion shrouding and showering… Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10+

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Obinna Eruchie 01 December 2009

naphright naphright (11/30/2009 11: 44: 00 PM) sweet to the taste

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Pregnant with passion my friend.

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Pia Andersson 10 October 2009

a sweet and touching poem.

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